Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

ROLE PLAY 11
A: Oh hey B are you waiting for me?
B: Hello Sir, how are you ?
A: I’m fine. How about you?
B: I’m fine too, but I have some issues that make me unhappy and unfairly so I want to discuss with you about those.
A: Yes. So what is the first one ?
B: Ah it is about the overseas posting. You promised to send me on an overseas posting after one year. I don’t know whether you do remember that ?
A: Yes I remember saying that. And you are wondering about that?
B: Yes I don’t know why Ramos- the Spanish guy was selected for that posting to Argentina instead of me.
A: About that I want to ask you two questions. First is: are you fluent in Spanish and second is : do you have prefect teamwork skills?
B: I am not fluent in Spanish much and my teamwork skills are just normal.
A: So that are the reasons. I want you to work in here more so that we can train your Spanish and your teamwork skills and when I think you’re ready, you will be selected for an overseas posting.
B: Ok I see. I’ll accept that. Oh, one more, I think marketing executive is the face of this company. And I have to drive this cheap car ? You did promise to give me a luxury car when I joined the company.
A: Jesus! Calm down! Okay, I agree, Yes I did promised to you but did you miss something?
B: Really, I don’t remember. Can you tell me again?
A: I said you would get a luxury car if you became a senior executive. You know, I always remember all of your efforts and dedication, I am considering to promote you and then you will get your luxury car. It’s so close, just trying harder.
B: Yes I am very appreciate to hear that. And my final issue is the bonus. My end-of-the-year bonus is 50% lower than I expected, What happened?.
A: Well, this happened to everyone, including me, you have to understand that we’re having a financial crisis. It’s pretty sad but I don’t think I can do anything about it.
B: Ok I can understand that. But if our company is stable I want a better bonus.
A: I promise with you.
B: I think I’m fine now.
A: I am very appreciated with all the word you said. So now you can get back to work now and have a nice day.
B: Thank you sir. Have a nice day. Bye.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I have some issues that make me unhappy and unfairly so I want to discuss with ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssues that make me unhappy and unfairly so I want to discuss with you about thos...
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Line 10, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... posting to Argentina instead of me. A: About that I want to ask you two questio...
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Line 13, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee. I'll accept that. Oh, one more, I think marketing executive is the face...
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Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne more, I think marketing executive is the face of this company. And I have to ...
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Line 14, column 46, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'promise'
Suggestion: promise
...us! Calm down! Okay, I agree, Yes I did promised to you but did you miss something? B: ...
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Line 17, column 18, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciate hearing'.
Suggestion: appreciate hearing
..., just trying harder. B: Yes I am very appreciate to hear that. And my final issue is the bonus. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, then, well, i think, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 93.0 5.60731707317 1659% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 965.302439024 192% => OK
No of words: 432.0 196.424390244 220% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28472222222 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 3.73543355544 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42544146762 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 106.607317073 190% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469907407407 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 283.868780488 197% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 1.53170731707 914% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 8.94146341463 459% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2434840496 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 45.1463414634 112.824112599 40% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5365853659 22.9334400587 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.58536585366 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 3.83414634146 574% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 3.70975609756 674% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.09268292683 367% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117789448958 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335589242332 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364729521818 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047981276699 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373616558329 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 13.2329268293 30% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 10.3012195122 36% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.36 11.4140731707 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.4329268293 31% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 11.0658536585 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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