The line graph illustrates the consumption of sweet foods created acid in the mouth, which can occurs tooth decay, the high level of acidity mean the low level of PH values.
Overall, witnessed the three ingredients sweet in the line graph fruit sugar, cane sugar and honey. The cane sugar acid level is high and very harmful for tooth to cause the decay in among other sweets foods and the honey level is low which the acid level for the tooth decay is unlikely.
Firstly, the PH eaten moment level start form 7, the cane sugar acid level is below 5.5, which is 3.5 PH level in 5 minutes and it is remain below from 5.5 till 30 minutes which is very dangerous and cause decay. However, the eaten of fruit PH level is show 4.3 which is the second dangerous for tooth and it’s below from 5.5 for around 20 minutes and make a higher chance to decay the tooth
Secondly, after consumption of honey It is not affect the tooth as like cane sugar the PH level drop 4.7 in 5 minutes after 15 minutes its raise from 5.5 and the acid level of decay is consider unlikely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'occur'
Suggestion: occur
...ds created acid in the mouth, which can occurs tooth decay, the high level of acidity ...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'sugars'.
Suggestion: sugars
...t sugar, cane sugar and honey. The cane sugar acid level is high and very harmful for...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
... is 3.5 PH level in 5 minutes and it is remain below from 5.5 till 30 minutes which is...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the second dangerous for tooth and it’s below from 5.5 for around 20 minutes and...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98997487421 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6500924458 43.030603864 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.6 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346629151637 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229606701104 0.103423049105 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125391654323 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248252919972 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856184533887 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.26 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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