Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.You should write at least 150 words.Allow yours

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Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)
Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.
You should write at least 150 words.
Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.

The graph above illustrate the relationship between acidity in mouth and the time elapsed after eating sweet food in terms of fruit sugar, cane sugar and honey.

We can see clearly that from the moment of consumption to about 3 minutes later, the PH level were all above the safe standard(5.5), which will not do harm to our teeth.

With time passing by, the PH level of all three kinds of sugar/honey decreased rapidly, reaching the lowest point at around the 5th minute, approximately 3.5(cane sugar), 4.2(fruit sugar) and 4.8(honey) respectively. The biggest risk was brought by cane sugar, lowering PH level for the longest period of time, 30 minutes, followed by fruit sugar, about 20 minutes. Honey appears an even less risky substance. Though acidity falls to about pH 4.8 within five minutes of consumption, it returns to above pH 5.5 in under fifteen minutes.

This implicated that for the sake of out teeth health, it is better for us to choose the ingredients properly when eating sweet food. Honey is undoubtedly the best choice, while cane sugar should be avoided whenever possible.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ugar, lowering PH level for the longest period of time, 30 minutes, followed by fruit sugar, a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281553398058 0.268076937826 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.106796116505 0.116061578633 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0533980582524 0.0759168565197 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0533980582524 0.0366838410393 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0242718446602 0.0131127313244 185% => OK
Prepositions: 0.160194174757 0.155750635184 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0436893203883 0.0379272487307 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54207853533 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0242718446602 0.0210936926555 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00485436893204 0.00175180941692 277% => OK
Determiners: 0.0873786407767 0.0948980150116 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0145631067961 0.00437022459523 333% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0145631067961 0.00967000014798 151% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1093.0 1161.00487805 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.9 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9402173913 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336956521739 0.337110787985 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239130434783 0.247514529752 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135869565217 0.171178102325 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0760869565217 0.112407865282 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54207853533 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.546246751206 124% => OK
Word variations: 72.9178441349 49.3433353143 148% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0094962315 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3627952617 42.9750493124 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.625 135.714022679 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.0094962315 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.689975730869 36% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 46.9130434783 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.63157894737 2.94281807926 89% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255871579136 0.418131533498 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108632474388 0.181151798455 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.092960443544 0.0850326197045 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.660693035581 0.706616315825 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.262518718013 0.157042692854 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123950863238 0.228904883108 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704493845728 0.108899403657 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.232055021982 0.367819155151 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0593914722344 0.0812612215331 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183880505953 0.316326947829 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274570615586 0.0921553760075 30% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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