Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
day by day, in the world, there is a uncountable amount of various food comsumpted. According to a research, sugar has the highest percentage of the amount of food per day. In my opinion, that taking too much sugar may affect our body negatively and the responsibility of bounding this promblem depends on each person
Over-comsumpted sugary food may promts us unhealthily. Generally, as human acts or eats something too much, it is absolutedly not good for our body. A recent study of Oxford University about sugar has revealed that the unlimited amount of sugary food taken is capable of leading to several serious diseases, and the most dangerous one which has been pointed out is sugary obesity. this disease may defense the blood flow and it obviously destroyed our health
that restricting the amount of suger is a personal charge. Each of us has our own bodies that have been gifted and it is everyone responsibility to protect and improve their health and body. The governments are not in ability to help and instruct all the residents and if they can do that, they may not give individuals the best sponsor. Therefore, people shoule aware of themselves and the toxic effect of over-taking sugary food
To sum up, I am convinced that the consumption of sugar into the body hab better be restricted and it is also a personal action. However, the governments should play a essential role in support people, especially in the social media and the improvement in the awareness
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- Eating too much sugar is harmful for health Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat Discuss both views and g 78
- Eating too much sugar is harmful for health Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat Discuss both views and g 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88932806324 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83517982178 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7200154679 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.7 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209076758901 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739510978588 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358322768253 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115118943695 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278277041021 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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