Economic growth is only one key factor for ending world poverty problem, however someone says it leads towards a environment damaging and should be stopped. Discuss both of these views and give you own opinion.
Economic growth is one of the best solution In order to finish the poverty problem from this world, whereas mostly people believes that economic growth increases the pollution as well as ruin the environment which need to be stopped. In my opinion, economic growth is redundant relatively environment to de-escalation of poverty, meanwhile environmental issues should be considered as well.
Nowadays, the world is moving rapidly towards the technology in order to make better economy which requires immense efforts to enhance economic growth. Along with this, economic growth is more essential and back bone of every country that ultimately helps country's people to spend a good life. In the same time, it has many adverse consequences in case of stopping economic growth for instance, unemployment ratio will increase, many production and service industries could be shut off, exporters will devastate, foreign reserve could be end and many others that eventually would be more and more dangerous for the country, as well as it may crash the country's economy to some extent.
In contrast, it is the responsibility of the government to keep an eye closer on these problems as well as implement sanctions on those products that produces so many pollutions for example, Heavy machineries, wastage of chemicals, industrial machines and others. Furthermore, government should take stern steps in order to stream line the situation not to shut down. It has different way to resolve environmental issue, but, it require ample of time to make it better. Survey depicts that it environmental issue has become global problem which is thought-provoking and international forums need to look after this matter.
In conclusion, there is no denying production and heavy machineries produces pollution which effect on environment, therefore, government should form the criteria of reducing pollution and keep pushing the economy growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun production seems to be countable; consider using: 'many productions'.
Suggestion: many productions
...ance, unemployment ratio will increase, many production and service industries could be shut of...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
...to resolve environmental issue, but, it require ample of time to make it better. Survey...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on and keep pushing the economy growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 300.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98227914335 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 106.607317073 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 283.868780488 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7489701429 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.5 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210998170658 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784498466101 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676266326236 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12351374335 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874287813547 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 40.7170731707 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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