Energy is used by average household and greenhouse gas emissions is produced by them
The first pie chart compares the proportion of energy is used by Australian households for six sectors whereas, the second pie chart gives some data about the corresponding percentage of greenhouse gas emissions by them.
Overall, it is clear that water heating is not the sector that consumed the largest proportion of energy usage, however, it is the key driver of greenhouse gas emissions. In contrast, this is the same trend in the percentage of energy usages and greenhouse gas emissions in the cooling and lighting sectors.
Look at the first chart, we can see in a typical household in Australia, 42% of total energy is used for heating, compared with 30% of energy for water heating. The remainder energy also is used for some other appliances, in which, refrigeration and other appliances account for 7% and 15% of the total energy usages respectively while just only 6% of the energy is used for both cooling and lighting.
The highest proportion of greenhouse gas emissions is water heating, about 32% of the total. Although heating consumed the greatest percentage of energy, just only 15% of the total greenhouse gas emissions are produced by the heating sector. By contrast, the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions is 28% and 14% in other appliances and refrigeration that is approximately double when comparing with their energy usage. In addition, this figure for cooling and lighting is just 3% and 8% of the total.
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| 2021-06-19 | Chu Thị Hải | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, second, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02928870293 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83507308496 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451882845188 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3801079558 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.555555556 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388223238184 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169961565515 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749192201351 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246638417636 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416087083769 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.