Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, i completely disagree w this view.
For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount of tax reduction for these families, and a professional staff would be required to manage this complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for some public services that we may not use. For example, most pp is fortunate enough not to have to call the police or fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would not expect the reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were offered a tax discount for sending their children to private schools, there would be a situation where poorer pp pay higher taxes than the rich.
In my point of view, we should be happy to willing to pay our share of money that supports public schools. It is beneficial for all members of society to get equal opportunities relating to have high quality education system. This will result in a well-educated workforce, and in turn a more productive and prosperous nation. Parents of children in private schools may also get the advantages of this in their own lives. For example, company owner will need a well qualified and competent staff for well paid positions, and a well-funded education system can provide such employees.
In conclusion, i do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for pp who choose private schools instead of state education system.
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- the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make them comparisons where relevant. 56
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92057761733 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68120971919 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8223815271 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333665410988 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123348331693 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710118152072 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218133422842 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034497798863 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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