the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make them comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make them comparisons where relevant.

The two diagrams show the different construction due to the development of some tourist facilities in an island.

It is clear that there is a variety of tourist facilities built in the island such as accommodation, restaurant, travelling service, infrastructure...

The most visible change of the island is probably based on the growth of transportation infrastructure. There is absolutely no way or path before in comparison with adequate footpaths and vehicle tracks near the beach after being resonated. Apart from that, a pier is built in the center of island so that tourists can easily access to the major area for travelling from the dock.

Accommodation area is divided into two parts with the reception among. The left-hand side one has a direct footpath lead to the swimming seashore. The right-hand side forms a circle of rooms where just takes a short walk to the restaurant.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14383561644 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15625624153 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1022129912 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186865757514 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724149845168 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798313739009 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119749467545 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920950292637 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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