Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
In recent years, the technology has been changed human lives however due this people do not have time to any other kind of extra activities while earlier people have much time to do it. In the course of the essay, I will describe reasons and the effect on the society.
Firstly, most of the time peolpe spend on the workplaces and doing extra work to improve theri skills and contribute in organisation progress. However these days people do not have enough money to spend on their hobbies. For example, a person working in commpany from morning to evening, and after his he has only limmited time which he spend with their family and friends, although these hobbies also demand of money. Most of the middle class would not have extra money if they spend on hobbies then their faimaly finance will disturb. In addition, people like to spend their time the internet.
On the other hand, the decrease in the hobbies which effect on the communities and on a person life. Many kind of extra activities makes contribution socitey and on those people who leave their hobbies. For instance, in city most people do gardening in there free time and plant tress which contribute to reduce climate problems if people leave thier activities then the tree growth will reduce. similarly, a person who spend time on book reading if he leave then his general level will decrese.
In conclusion, people change their way of living and they spend most of the time on jobs however people not spend time on activities this ternd creates effect on his person lif and on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ogy has been changed human lives however due this people do not have time to any ...
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Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s been changed human lives however due this people do not have time to any other ki...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nd contribute in organisation progress. However these days people do not have enough mo...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... his he has only limmited time which he spend with their family and friends, although...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many kinds'.
Suggestion: Many kinds
...n the communities and on a person life. Many kind of extra activities makes contribution ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e climate problems if people leave thier activities then the tree growth will red...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Similarly
...ities then the tree growth will reduce. similarly, a person who spend time on book readin...
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Suggestion: leaves
...on who spend time on book reading if he leave then his general level will decrese. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ffect on his person lif and on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27811870345 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1508449119 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164718474042 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693360478984 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435970312269 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124057095968 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381949454987 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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