Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
In recent years, the technology has been changed human lives however due to this people do not have time to any other kind of extra activities while earlier people have much time to do it. In the course of the essay, I will describe reasons and the effect on the society.
Firstly, most of the time people spend on the workplaces and doing extra work to improve their skills and contribute in organization progress. However, these days people do not have enough money to spend on their hobbies. For example, a person working in company from morning to evening, and after his he has only limited time which he spends with their family and friends, although these hobbies also demand of money. Most of the middle class would not have extra money if they spend on hobbies then their family finance will disturb. In addition, people like to spend their time the internet.
On the other hand, the decrease in the hobbies which effect on the communities and on a person life. Many kinds of extra activities makes contribution society and on those people who leave their hobbies. For instance, in city most people do gardening in there free time and plant tress which contribute to reduce climate problems if people leave their activities then the tree growth will reduce. Similarly, a person who spend time on book reading if he leaves then his general level will decrease.
In conclusion, people change their way of living, and they spend most of the time on jobs however people not spend time on activities this trend creates effect on his person if and on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...been changed human lives however due to this people do not have time to any other ki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75457875458 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28719896367 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479853479853 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6919882755 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174046581031 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751777506463 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411469323295 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130165382336 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357197859897 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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