The bar graph is used to demonstrate the smoking habits for varied range of age groups on the basis of 4 categories.
The percentage of No Smokers is shown to be exponentially high among the age group of 16-24 with more 60% while the age group between 35-44 closely following behind. Lowest percentage of Non Smokers are among the age group of 65-74. While the age groups of 25-34,45-54 and 55-64 all have No Smokers percentage well below 60%.
Coming high in the Ex-Smokers category is the age group of 65-74 with almost around 40% belonging here. The age group of 55-64 comes a close second with fairly high percentage in this category compared to the remaining age groups. Other age groups barely have 5-7% to show in this category.
The graph depicts a hefty 35% Light Smokers in the age group between 25-34. 30% of age group between 16-24 are seemed to prefer Light Smoking. While the age groups 55-64 and 65-74 have to show only 15% and 10% here, the remaining two age groups have considerable 18-20% in this category.
Heavy Smokers seems to low takers regardless of the age groups. With only 45-54 age group to show more than 10% in this section. The remaining groups are well below 5% here.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Lowest'.
Suggestion: The Lowest
...between 35-44 closely following behind. Lowest percentage of Non Smokers are among the...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and 65-74 have to show only 15% and 10% here, the remaining two age groups have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67289719626 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31796426568 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46261682243 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7759298938 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9230769231 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0772471806161 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402173939145 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213896587205 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610344086658 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207736077775 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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