The letter to the editor of the west lansburg news argues that the road along the edge of wetlands should not be allowed to built as it may endanger the biodiversity and population of tufted groundhog. However the letter doesn't mention the purpose for which the road has to be built,also lacks quantification and has troubled analogy.
The author of the letter mentions that it is the interest of local development to build a road along the edges of the wetland but he or she doesn't mention the purpose for which the road is to be built. The road could be built for access to the wetlands so that researchers and scientist interested in local wetlands or tufted groundhogs can reach their it would seriously undermine authors' argument. This information would have allowed the editor better insight for opposition of road.
The author of the letter presents a stat which says that sea otter population declined in a similar sanctuary after the repeal of the sanctuary's status. It would have given the editor better understanding of the graveness of the step to repeal the sanctuary's status if the author would have quantified the decline of sea otters population. Also the author derives a analogy between the sanctuary in eastern carpenteria and west lansburg based on vague terms like "similar". If the sanctuary's are similar only one of all the aspects of ecology then it would have seriously weaken the author's argument.
The letter suggests that to ensure healthy environment and help protect region's biodiversity the road shouldn't be allowed to built. The author doesn't provide the current situation of tufted groundhog's population. If after the declaration of wildlife sanctuary in the wetlands of west lansburg the population of tufted groundhog has again numbered to millions then building one access road along the edge of the land wouldn't pose much of a threat if safety precautions are taken for the biodiversity.
Thus the author of the letter fails to provide information that would've allowed the editor to better understand why the west lansburg council should not allow the road to be built on the edges of the wetlands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
...ity and population of tufted groundhog. However the letter doesnt mention the purpose f...
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...of tufted groundhog. However the letter doesnt mention the purpose for which the road ...
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...eal the sanctuarys status if the author would have quantified the decline of sea otters population. A...
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...ould have quantified the decline of sea otters population. Also the author derives a a...
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Suggestion: weakened
...of ecology then it would have seriously weaken the authors argument. The letter sug...
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...p protect regions biodiversity the road shouldnt be allowed to built. The author doesnt ...
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...etter fails to provide information that wouldve allowed the editor to better understand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 357.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05602240896 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80355916249 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434173669468 0.468620217663 93% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5317886772 57.8364921388 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.846153846 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.70786347227 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232998749635 0.218282227539 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977051435843 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832241056125 0.0701772020484 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155327157977 0.128457276422 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712263126224 0.0628817314937 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.3799401198 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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