The figure shows the number of workers employed in three different areas in the United Kingdom between 1980 and 1990.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This line graph illustrates the number of workers in a hundred thousand in Engineering, Servis industry, and Agriculture sector in Great Britain between 1980 and 1990 as a whole. The data represented by the graph reflect inevitable exciting and insightful fluctuations.
Overall, it would seem that the Servis industry consistently had more workers than that of other occupations from the beginning and until the end. Also, there was a significant drop in the Agriculture section.
In 1980, there were about 550000 workers in the Servis industry slightly more than Agriculture and Engineering sectors (500000) and (400000), respectively. Servis industry experienced a steady increase until 1986 (600000) and followed by rapid growth and reached a peak (850000) in 1988, then remain steady. However, the Agriculture sector was faced with a dramatic drop until 1985 (100000) and continued with a constant decline until 1990 and reached just under 50000. In contrast, Engineering fell gradually from 400000 in 1980 to 200000 in 1990.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44375 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84960934823 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.239711418 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904344652007 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397480716041 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452098062308 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634854805467 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035026379697 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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