The two pie charts compare the amount of energy use and greenhouse gas released in Australian household on different kinds of categories. Overall, it is obviously seen that although Australians use the largest proportion of energy on heating, the gas come from it is just minor. Also, refrigeration and other appliances emissons are much more larger than their previous use.
The majority of energy use belongs to heating ( at 42%), however, this only make up 15% among gas emissions. Following the first kind of energy is water heating which has the similar proportions of consumption and emission, at almost under one third of each pie chart. Similarly, the electricity used and emitted from cooling are also at the same lowest rate, at under 5%. The third rank of energy in both charts is other appliances that consumpt nearly a half of its waste towards the environment, at 15% and 28% respectively. There are two types of appliance which see the same trend, refrigerator and light. The gas released from lighting is 8% which double its use ( at 4%). Nevertheless, the percentage of lighting emission only represent a half of share of the refrigeration figure, at 8% compared to 14%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'larger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: larger
... and other appliances emissons are much more larger than their previous use. The majority ...
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Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ajority of energy use belongs to heating at 42%, however, this only make up 15% a...
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Line 2, column 666, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from lighting is 8% which double its use at 4%. Nevertheless, the percentage of l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, third, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9648241206 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83211194326 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597989949749 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0268213436 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27294040737 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114270343018 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741498706977 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231070423286 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383123571404 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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