The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts in combination depict the proportion of energy used in household in Australia and the release of greenhouse has from the use of different gas in household.
Overall, as shown in first pie chart, heating was the major consumption of energy in Australia, whereas, cooling was the lowest. Similarly, water heating was the major responsible for greenhouse gas and cooling release the lowest portion of greenhouse.
To begin with, the maximum percentage of gas used in Australia was in heating purpose, which is accounted 42%, however, it was followed by water heating with 30%. In third position, for consumption of energy was other appliances with 15%, hence, refrigeration is lessen by 50%. Furthermore, lighting and cooling was calculated the lowest source to consume energy with 4% and 25% respectively.
Secondly, as per the second chart, water heating release highest portion of greenhouse gas from used energy, which is 30% and with 28% other appliances was in second position. However, heating emissions 15% of greenhouse gas, hence, refrigeration represent 14%. Whereas, the lowest slice in the pie chart was cooling, which is just 3% and lighting was accounted 8% for greenhouse gas emission.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lessened'.
Suggestion: lessened
...ances with 15%, hence, refrigeration is lessen by 50%. Furthermore, lighting and cooli...
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Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'release the highest'.
Suggestion: release the highest
... as per the second chart, water heating release highest portion of greenhouse gas from used ene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88640969835 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7363494163 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 5.23603664747 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218550209295 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112816882971 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828334321737 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174423541015 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921322460013 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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