Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
This is not denying that, in this modernization era we are lucky to see various development, while, but same time world have to encounter wide range of problem related to environment, population and literacy too. Despite of this, there are many other problems that in near future my country also has to face, as a part of this world. Deforestation and traffic Jam can be the challenging issue in next ten years. In this essay, we will discuss on these two issues and their possible solution.
To begin with, deforestation can be the one of the manor problem in next some years in my country. Every year in the name of development, many trees are cutting down with the permission of government without caring their negative impact in future. For Intense, recently Nepal government had announced, new international airport in terai region and for the space they give permission to cut more than 1 lakhs tree of terai forest. As a result, we can say that there will be negative impact in environment, like landslide, flood , maximum heat and less raining, extinct of many important flora and fauna.
Furthermore, another big issue that my country can face in next 10 years is traffic Jam. Due to the high number of private vehicle and unsystematic public transport, traffic can be one of the major problem to our country. People prefer their own vehicle to public due to the unsystematic management and timing problem of public transport, hence this cause traffic in road and people spend their valuable time in stucking in road.
On other hand, to overcome of these problems, government has to exercise carefully in this sector with expert team and implement law by recognizing both side of development. Development in every sector is acceptable, but, government need to exercise that with less deforestation and, at the same time, they must run the champion of forestation. Regarding to traffic, the systematic public transport with basic facilities can reduce the traffic jam. Higher seated bus can replace the small public transport and neat & clean and on timing system can encourage public to ride public vehicle.
In conclusion, various problem can be rises with the development in the world, but the government of formal country must change their rules and regulation as per the issues rise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
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...ct in environment, like landslide, flood , maximum heat and less raining, extinct ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, regarding, so, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9921875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75117946147 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544270833333 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1432479509 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8125 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235312106009 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840617150187 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605364137919 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135009402378 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563788722706 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.