The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Given are the two pie charts and the first pie chart gives information about the use of power on an average in Australian house while the second chart provides information about greenhouse gas excretion which is developed by the use of this energy. the unis are shown in percentage.
overall, the greenhouse gas emissions recorded highest in almost all power usage whereas, Australian families energy used is recorded lowest as compared to household energy use.
heating in the Australian house contributes to the main energy with 42% of usage whereas, there is a drastic fall in greenhouse gas discharge which is recorded 15 percent. the second main energy use in the household is water heating which is 30 % while in greenhouse gas emission there is a smaller increment of 2%. Refrigeration is half of the greenhouse gas emission which is 7% in household power use. there is significant growth in other appliances of greenhouse gas emission use which is recorded 28% however, in household energy use it is almost half with 15%. comparing colling as well as lighting, colling remains almost the same with a slight difference of 1 %in greenhouse gas emission while lighting contributes to 8 % in greenhouse power emission and it is half of the household energy use which is 4 %.
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 67
- The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Suggestion: The
...is developed by the use of this energy. the unis are shown in percentage. overall,...
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Suggestion: Overall
...rgy. the unis are shown in percentage. overall, the greenhouse gas emissions recorded ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...ost all power usage whereas, Australian families energy used is recorded lowest as compa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Heating
... as compared to household energy use. heating in the Australian house contributes to ...
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Suggestion: The
...discharge which is recorded 15 percent. the second main energy use in the household...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ion which is 7% in household power use. there is significant growth in other applianc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Comparing
... energy use it is almost half with 15%. comparing colling as well as lighting, colling re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97196261682 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83503412773 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453271028037 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4524241718 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482181820153 0.215688989381 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.235578236394 0.103423049105 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106210189128 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330660478489 0.15604864568 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289832668142 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.