The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989

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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

the bar chart illustrates the change in the cost of average houses in New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt, and London from the year 1990 to 2002which is compared with the average percentage change in 1989. The data is presented in two spans of the chart and the unit are shown in percentage.
overall, The graph showed a downward trend in the three countries New York, Tokyo, and London in the years 1990 and 1995, while from 1996 to 2002 there was an upward trend in the average house value of New York, Spain, and London. however, there was a minor change in Frankfort and both years showed a rise in the cost of the average change in the house.
It is cleared from the graph that in the year 1990 to 1995 the average house cost in the New York fallen drastically to -5% as well as Tokyo was dipped about to -7% compared to 1989 prices. In addition, Madrid and Germany were gone up to approximately 2% and 3% respectively compared to the year 1989 percentage change.
on the other hand, in the year 1996 to 2002, the average house cost in New York rose to 5%. However, there was a dramatic increase in the cost of an average house in London and it was recorded about 12%compared to the year 1989, while in the same years Tokyo fell drastically to -5%. In contrast, Madrid also climbed about to 4% as well as Germany to approximately 3% as compared to the year 1989 percentage change.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.421875 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.402277057 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41796875 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1822009358 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.777777778 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292562692434 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147310635569 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082453024986 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219436505655 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452354089298 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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