The two pie charts illustrate the percentage breakdown of household energy consumption and the average greenhouse gas from using this energy in six different categories in Australia.
Overall, it is clear that in Household energy usage, the energy using for heating takes the largest area while its greenhouse gas emissions stand at third. Conversely, Cooling was always the lowest energy using and also the greenhouse gas it releases.
The highest percentages of energy using are for heating and water heating, around 42% and 30% respectively. Australian use the least amount of energy for cooling, in comparison, only 2% of the total for this. With the twofold amounts of energy for cooling, making lighting's ranking stands at the fifth widely use. Two groups lay in between are refrigeration 7% and other appliances 15%.
The figure for water heating takes the similar percentages in both two charts whereas the ranking of heating can not maintain its leading position, around 15% in the second chart. The greenhouse gas is released by refrigeration consists 14% of the total, doubling the amounts it uses. The figure for lighting tends to be identical. Other appliances emit greenhouse gas more than the proportion it uses. Resemble the former group, Cooling releases the percentages slightly higher than using 1%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, second, so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27488151659 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73311417155 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563981042654 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7171817405 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295027450609 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11111112772 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887201784949 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212905160686 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795626995199 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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