The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the green house gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The two pie charts illustrates the percentage of energy use as well as how much greenhouse gas emission for this energy use in Australian household.
Overall, different types of energy use in australian household but heating is the highest amount use. The Cooling is the lowest percentage of energy use and also the lowest amount of greenhouse gase emission.
According to the pie charts, In Australian household 30% energy use for water heating as a result 32% 32% water heating greenhouse gas emission. The refrigeration and other application energy are use 7% and 15% respectively and this type of gas emission significantly increase to 14% and 28%. The cooling is the least amount of energy use which is 2% and only 1% rise for gas emission.
The heating is the almost half energy use in Australian household which is 42% and only 15% gas emission occur from this energy use. The lighting is also the lowest percentage energy use to 4% and increase the gas emission to 8% for this energy use
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84302325581 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73453046089 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412790697674 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.1053903067 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.125 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451566063976 0.215688989381 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.258120312963 0.103423049105 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106241446613 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34309149151 0.15604864568 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899608743926 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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