Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten.
What is your view? Discuss.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Globalization has integrated this world economically, politically, socially which in turn has brought tremendous benefits not only for the people but also for many countries. However, one cannot segregate the negative effects of globalization. Thus, I am going to express my views over this statement.
To begin with, globalization has brought unprecedented harmony and synchronization between countries which results manifold positive sides. Firstly, globalization has promoted business at a rapid pace, as a result people have got huge employment opportunities which has narrowed the backwardness of any country as well as improve the lifestyle of people. On top of that, It has also ensured healthy competition among companies which ultimately comes in the form of good quality of products with affordable price which is again a beneficial factor for people. For instance, It has been found that the economic rate of many developing countries such as India, South Africa, is growing swiftly on account of globalization.
However, every situation has two aspects, positive and negative, which is similar in this case. It is notable that globalization has also become a debatable issue owing to its myriad negative affects. Firstly, it has become a major reason for the downfall of many local businesses. Furthermore, people now prefer to work for multinational companies because they offer huge perks and salary, which is the major cause of brain-drain. Secondly, there seems threat on the culture and tradition of many countries due to the influence of westernization, which is erroneous for the development of any nation.
In conclusion, globalization has changed human's lives dramatically, but one should always be meticulous about negative sides of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5447761194 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19922161395 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3982248188 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1333454279 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494459320407 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337415748057 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942005705301 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318455464785 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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