The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.

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The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.

There have been given two different charts which illustrate data about the trends of UK residents´ visits abroad.
the first one registered the number of Uk resident who travelled abroad from 1994 to 1998 as well as its travelling grounds, meanwhile the second graph provides information about the different regions the visitors chose as destination during the same period.
Talking on the first chart, it is notable that principal purpose of going broad was for Holidays. This category has shown a steady upward trend. The second reason of travel is business, nearly followed by visiting relatives or friends. They both have undergone a gradual slow rise; while the figure of unknown motives has barely altered during this period.

Provided the second graph, it is very clear the preference on the European continent as data reflects, remarking a huge distance to the other regions studied. Despite, the decrease in 1995, each region has increased their visits, but being Europe the one with the sharpest development exceeding 24,000 people in one year.
Overall, it is mainly observed a growth of UK residents travelling abroad, remarking holidays as main purpose of their journeys as well their tendency on visiting the European region more frequently

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, while, as for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30845771144 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62172533394 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671641791045 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7645586375 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.555555556 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232192244717 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079574042767 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533613472424 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114693149101 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535109865041 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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