The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The two charts below shows data from a survey conducted from 1994-1998. The first one entails the reasons of visit internationally done by UK citizens. Samples were taken from 100,000 respondents. The second chart listed the destinations.
Holiday visit is the most prominent reason for travel according to the participants that peaked in the year 1998 with 20, 700 as results. The year 1995 had the lowest number by 14, 898. Other reasons which are not stated proved to have the least reason across the five-year study. Business and visit to friends and relatives do not even cross even a quarter of the used population with its values amounting only to 2,000-4,000.
Most residents prefer to explore the Western part of Europe with an increasing trend through the years from 19, 371 people reaching 24, 519 by 1998, achieving almost a quarter of respondents. Northern America least interested the residents with an approximate addition of only hundreds annually. Other ares stand in the middle with results ranging from 1,782 to 2,486.
As we can see, the last year of the study had the most number of participants who travelled garnering the highest results. Various reasons were cited yet holidays became the best reason to head out for a while and most of them go to Western Europe. Other reasons not given were the least of them all with a variable trend. North America showed to be the last choice for visit-other areas used for business and catching up with friends and relatives had a steady sate in this study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90733590734 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55970870311 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5923540696 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131509412677 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490771830467 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502352899344 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887178318772 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704326768877 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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