The table illustrates 100000 British visits abroad and the reasons for their travels according to a survey reported from 1994 to 1998. At the same time, the bar chart presents the destinations of these people.
Overall, the number of travellers among 100000 UK residents increased steadily over the period and they travelled overseas mostly on holidays. By the way, the main destination of these people was Western Europe.
According to the table, from 1994 to 1998, the total visits abroad rose stably from 22,072 to 28,828. On holiday, the travelling proportion was the highest, which was 15,246 travellers in 1994, slightly dropped to 14,898 in 1995 but increase in the last 3 years. This figure was almost fivefold the number of travellers overseas for business (3,15-3,957), friends or relatives gatherings (2,628-3,181) and was15 times higher than the percentage of visits abroad for other reasons (about 896-1054).
According to the table, in 1994, about 19000 British travelled to Western Europe, which almost fourfolded the number of travellers in North America and other regions (1000 and 2000 respectively). In 1995, the number slightly decreased to over 16000 but surged to nearly 25000 in 1998. Meanwhile, the quantity of UK travellers to North America and other areas kept rising in a low proportion over the period.
- The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view 11
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children s sports between 2008 and 2014 The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period 84
- Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person Why do you think this is the case What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person Give reasons f 89
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...ng in a low proportion over the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, as for, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23474178404 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62322446982 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558685446009 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.464027333 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251207099837 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986909086784 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494813273455 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163488696757 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037623972301 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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