The first graph below shows the weight (in tonnes) of fruit produced by a farm during each month in 2013, and also the amount (in tonnes) of fertilizer used. The second graph shows the volume of rainfall in each month. (in millimetres.)
The first graph illustrates the weight of fruits manufactured by farms during per month in 2013, as well as of fertilizer use (units are measured in tonnes). In addition, the second graph presents the volume of rainfall in per month ( units are measured in millimetres).
According to the graph, just after reaching it is highest point progressively the mass of fruit produced in 2013 has plunged to 2,2 tonnes from 4 tonnes.
Ironically, amount of fertilizer allocated in cultivating fruits slightly increased from 0.5 tonnes to 0,8. After that, it gradually decreased and reached to 0. Subsequently, since September amount of fertilizer noticeably increased.
The second bar chart indicates the amount of rainfall in 2013. During the February and December it has reached it is climax point, while from July to August it has not changed at all from 4 millimeter. Additionally, in January as well as November the volume of rainfall has not gone through the change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents the volume of rainfall in per month units are measured in millimetres. Acc...
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Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
...ng to the graph, just after reaching it is highest point progressively the mass of fruit p...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'millimeter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'millimeters'.
Suggestion: millimeters
...August it has not changed at all from 4 millimeter. Additionally, in January as well as No...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09493670886 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90404273185 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0435264988 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357017556853 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132362398409 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968309236822 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192405748568 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928560291273 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.