The first line graph shows the average world oil price for each year from 1970 to 2005 The second chart shows the top seven oil exporting countries and how much they export each day

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The first line graph shows the average world oil price for each year from 1970 to 2005. The second chart shows the top seven oil exporting countries and how much they export each day.

The two graphs below show the oil prices from 1970 to 2005 and the number of oil barrels sold every day in 2005 from top 6 oil exporting countries.
From the first chart, the oil price from 9 dollars from 1970, which is the lowest price, slightly increased to 15 dollars in 1973. Then, it rapidly jumped to 46 dollars in 1974. The oil price after that big jump stayed stable about 44 dollars each barrel until 1979. A quickly risen to 80 dollars in 1980 and achieve the highest price in the gap - 85 dollars after 1 year. After the peak from 1981, the cost of each oil barrel freely drop to 26 dollars in 1986. Afterward, the value of oil was unbalance which was shifting between 18 and 35 dollars each barrel from 197 to 2003. Lastly, from 2003 the price steeply increased to 51 dollars in 2005.
From the second chart, top 6 most oil exporting countries in ascending order in 2005 was Nigeria, UAE, Iran, Norway, Russia and Saudi Arabia. The four countries Nigeria, UAE, Iran and Norway seemed the nearly equivalence in the amount of exporting barrels from 2.4 to 2.8 millions of barrels a day. Russia had 7.7 millions barrels, which was a three quarter of the sums of 4 listed countries. And the largest oil exporting country, Saudi Arabia was sold 9 millions barrels of oil per day, which equaled the sums of 4 countries Nigeria to Norway.
Overall, oil market was the inconstant income and the market share over the world was not equal.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...ount of exporting barrels from 2.4 to 2.8 millions of barrels a day. Russia had 7.7 millions ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51145038168 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19880378961 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522900763359 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7963051751 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9230769231 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358244891851 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133591241174 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109215467878 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224389644235 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128700494148 0.0819641961636 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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