The two given pie charts give information about energy distribution to different roles in an average Australian house and how each of these roles contributes to the house's gas emissions.
Overall, in an Australian house, energy is used mostly for heating and water heating but only water heating contributes the highest amount of gas emissions. By contrast, energy used for cooling and lighting is the lowest, simultaneously, they also account for the lowest amount of gas emissions.
According to the first pie chart, nearly half of household energy is used for heating (42%). The second highest energy usage is 30% for water heating and the third is 15% used for other appliances. Only 7%, 4%, and 2% of the total household energy are used for refrigeration, lighting, and cooling respectively.
Turning to the other pie chart, water heating accounts for the highest amount of household gas emissions of 32% despite only 30% of the household energy used. Similarly, other appliances contribute 28% to the total emissions, refrigeration, lighting, and cooling make up 14%, 8%, and 4% respectively. Adversely, energy is mostly used for heating but only this activity only constitutes 15% of the total household gas emissions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, similarly, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22842639594 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91615419142 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46192893401 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2174099134 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278080711522 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145462262767 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657385662665 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193779982977 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349136518471 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.