The flow chart shows the process of admission for admission into university

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The flow chart shows the process of admission for admission into university

. The given layout representation reveals the information about the procedure of getting admission into university . It is clear and cohernt representation .
At the first glance , after the obtaining high school , an application form is filled ; which can be downloaded from website . After that , documentation have been collected , and send to the admin to get admission into the university. It takes two weeks for acceptance complete enrolment , and two for provisional acception in which if any one document has been missed . Then they again compile the documentation ,and send to admin . Also , some file are rejected? ; cancel the application form . Afterwards , complete application for rejected couse , and send to admin then acceptance the complete enrolment ; subject should be selected . After that , register with dean and enter the university .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6062992126 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17285671319 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.352677484 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 49.0 1.69756097561 2886% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160472764663 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567847286184 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766937325832 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148234653127 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392199011055 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.3012195122 89% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.37 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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