The flow charts shows the life cycle of silkworm and the production of silk cloth

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The flow charts shows the life cycle of silkworm and the production of silk cloth.

The former flow chart depicts the information about the life cycle of the silkworm and the another picture describes how the silk cloth is produced.

A close look on the first picture makes it lucid that, the silkworm lays egg on mulberry leaf. After ten days, the egg hatch into silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaf. In the third step, silk thread covers the larva after the period of 4-6 days from second phase. After 3 to 8 days, the cocoon produces and adult moth emerges from the cocoon after 16 days.

It is clear from the another diagram that, the cocoon is selected by man in the initial stage. After that, the cocoon is boiled into water. The silk thread is unwinded from cocoon which is 300-900m long. In the fourth step, the thread is placed into dye for colouring. Finally, the silk cloth is manufactured after the process of weaving.

Thus from an overall analysis, the life cycle of silkworm is natural process that involves total four steps. Whereas, the production of silk cloth is man made process which is completed into five different stages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ctured after the process of weaving. Thus from an overall analysis, the life cycl...
^^^^
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...process that involves total four steps. Whereas, the production of silk cloth is man ma...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, second, third, thus, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72872340426 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14611015991 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.804150183 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262498178392 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921645541027 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116447512327 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200137115895 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148328053234 0.0819641961636 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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