Some people believe that robots are important for the future human development. While others say that they are dangerous and put negative impact on society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
This is an era of science and technology, an artificial intelligence makes the human life full of comfortable. Majority of folks reckon that automatic machines are more valuable for the future development. Whereas, the rest of commoners realize that robots are harmful and put detrimental impact on the country. Personally, I believe that automatic machines put more adverse effect on individual's life in many ways.
Why most persons opine that robots are crucial for the future development. The first key fact probably be that, if owner of the company install artifical intelligence then they would uplift the productivity as well as profit of the company. Because, it is single type investment and company will have no need to give salary to robots and they can work round a clock without any coffee or lunch break, salary and sick leave.
Another chief point might be that, robots would finish any task before the deadline of that task which is not possible for human's being in some critical circumstances. So, intelligence devices are important for future development. Robots would perform each and every task in better way . That is why, the chances of the mistake may lesser than that work which is done by citizens.
Nevertheless, how artificial intelligence can put negative impact on human's life in order to justify latter view. First and foremost, if robots are worked in work place then citizens of the nation would confront unemployment which may rise crimes in the society. Additional, people would more rely on such technology which makes the sedentary lifestyle of the individuals. Consequently, people may become lazy and lethargic and may suffer from several
diseases such as headache, joint pain and obesity.
In gist, it can be confidently conveyed that, it is undeniable that automatic machines would increase the profit of the company and makes the human life luxurious. But, it can not be avoided that it would also put detrimental impact on individual's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'artificial intelligence'.
Suggestion: artificial intelligence
...is is an era of science and technology, an artificial intelligence makes the human life full of comfortabl...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...more valuable for the human development in future. Whereas, the rest of commoners realize...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...tic machines put more adverse effect on individuals life in many ways. Why most of pers...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the persons') or simply say ''most persons''.
Suggestion: most of the persons; most persons
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Suggestion:
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...intelligence can put negative impact on humans life in order to justify latter view. ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...it would also put detrimental impact on individuals life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, well, whereas, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13190184049 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76100896685 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8239640657 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4117647059 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210902734747 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690089482706 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527861766005 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091015704958 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482114687648 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.