The flow charts shows the production of cement and concrete.

Essay topics:

The flow charts shows the production of cement and concrete.

The former flow chart depicts the information about the process of manufacturing of cement. Whereas, the another picture describes the information about the production of concrete.

Thus, from an overall anlaysis, it can be said that both the production of cement and concrete is man-made process.

A close look on the first diagram makes it clear that, in the first step, limestone and clay are crushed with crrusher and powder is formed. In the next step, powder is inserted into mixer, the one end of the mixer is connected with rotating heater, the powder is rotated inside the rotating heater and heat is supplied from the another end of the cylinder. Later on, the powder is grindered with the help of grinder. Finally, cement is produced which is packed into bags and it is ready for selling in market.

As far as the production of concrete is concern, first of all, 15% cement, one-tenth water, a quater of sand and half proportion of gravel is put into concrete mixer. The concrete mixer is rotated and mixture is ready for construction use.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the process of manufacturing of cement. Whereas, the another picture describes the info...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, thus, whereas, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88950276243 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53377418077 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558011049724 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4273974058 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184948388737 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797064434483 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873270370658 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133055386032 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109567028621 0.0819641961636 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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