The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.

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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.

Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.

The diagram illustrates how plastic paper clips are produced in a factory. As can be seen from the diagram, the manufacturing involves in six main stages which begins with molten plastic and ends with the shipping process.
To begin with, molten plastic is poured into 3 different colored moulds namely red, blue and yellow. After this stage is completed, paper clips from the mentioned moulds are checked for strength by a quality control mechanism. Well-qualified clips are then sorted by hands with other materials into 2 different categories which are mixed and single colours. At the same time, unqualified ones are rejected.
At the following stage, the mixed colour and single color paper clips having clarified carefully are checked one more time for their colour quality by a quality control division. Finally, the paper clips are packed and really for delivery.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, so, then, well, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21276595745 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54869580557 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3046983206 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196497992421 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950964629768 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807378233449 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1401389476 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415236255893 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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