The following chart show the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to housing preferences of UK people

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The following chart show the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to housing preferences of UK people.

The bar chart illustrates the data on housing preferences of UK people in Liverpool, London, and Manchester. These were apart of the British survey made in 2009.
Overall, London citizens and Liverpool citizens preferred apartments most, while people in Manchester tend toward detached-houses. By contrast, the lowest figures belong to Terraced houses in all cities.
As can be seen from the chart, about 60 % of Liverpool citizens have chosen to live in apartments as nearly three times as Manchester. However, the opposite tendency could be seen in the figures for detached-houses and semi-detached houses, according to around 16% and well over 35% of the preferences expressed in each opinion in Liverpool and Manchester. On the other hand, just around 10% of citizens of both cities chosen terraced houses.
There were about 35% of people in London preferred detached-houses. Next to it was apartments and semi-detached houses which over 35 for the former and nearly 30% for the latter. Finally, just about 12% of London citizens chosen terraced houses.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: APART_A_PART[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a part of' or 'apart from'?
Suggestion: a part of; apart from
...ool, London, and Manchester. These were apart of the British survey made in 2009. Overa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, well, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04507872872 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1343823551 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135127846603 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660971379597 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680238766869 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114653990727 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107599023123 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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