The diagram illustrates the procedure of energy trapping caused by greenhouse gases. It is immediately apparent that there are three stages relatively to trap the energy from the sun as the the impacts of deforestation and polluted air.
There are various main causes of energy trapping releasing toxic fumes into the earth’s atmosphere, which are via public transportation and factories. While the former –cars, planes, motorcycles, and others– release the toxic smokes, the latter produce the pollution. Hence, both of them would generate extra carbon dioxide from burning fossils fuels. Another cause of creating greenhouse gases is by cutting down the trees which will absorb the carbon dioxide from the atmosphere.
Moving to the second steps, all those combinations of factors would form the clouds which will trap the greenhouse gases to remain in the air and it will heat up the earths temperature. Lastly, the third stages, the heat from the sun will reflect off to atmosphere, and it cannot be reached by the ground.
- Too much money is spent on maintaining and repairing old buildings Some people think that they should be knocked down to give way to modern buildings To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- The pie charts show the result of a survey of children’s activities. The first chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second chart shows the activities in which the girls participate. 84
- Personal Statement 40
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world especially among young people Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose solutions you think would be effective 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...vely to trap the energy from the sun as the the impacts of deforestation and polluted a...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...vely to trap the energy from the sun as the the impacts of deforestation and polluted a...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...main in the air and it will heat up the earths temperature. Lastly, the third stages, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, lastly, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28915662651 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73013217918 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.812916664 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19383304268 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880271018698 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710506696975 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144386734924 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792281630415 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.