The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.
The diagram illustrates the way greenhouse gases produced and affects to the surface of the earth.
The heat from the sun should directly absorb in the surface of the earth and it would bounce back to the space. However, this procedure is no longer possible due to the mankind actions such as the deforestation and polluted air.
There are various ways of releasing toxic fumes into the earth’s atmosphere, which are by means of public transport and factories. The engine of a car, plane, motorised boat or other form of vehicles release of toxic smokes and the pollutions from factories would...
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The diagram illustrates the way greenhouse gases produced and affects to the surface of the earth.
The diagram illustrates the way greenhouse gases are produced and the effects to the surface of the earth.
The heat from the sun should directly absorb in the surface
The heat from the sun should be directly absorbed in the surface
by cutting down the trees in the forests, which supposed to absorb all the carbon dioxide
by cutting down the trees in the forests, which are supposed to absorb all the carbon dioxide
All those combination of actions would create clouds which will trap the greenhouse gases to remain in the air and it will heat it up the earth’s temperature
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