The first map illustrate the map of Peyton Park now, while the second one is the change done.
Firstly, in the centre of the Park, there is a lake surrounded by three tables with chairs to the North, where is the Picnic Area located. In addition, a Tennis Court situated at the South-west of the picnic zone, and to the west of the lake. Behind the lake, a parking lot was located in the south of it.
As for the second one, considerable changes took place in the Park. Alongside the lake, a swimming dock was built to the west of it, with an additional swings and a seesaw established to the north-west of the lake. The Picnic area was moved towards the north-east of it, with the Tennis Court re-located to the east of it. While the parking lot was still remained at the back of the lake of the Park.
- The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and a plan for proposed changes. 61
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- The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and a plan for proposed changes. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nis Court re-located to the east of it. While the parking lot was still remained at t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, so, still, while, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 659.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33552631579 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31690127319 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9889526372 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.375 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115123507016 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645689380893 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06620562166 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105670191417 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658591674675 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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