The following table gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This table illustrates the data about the quality of life in Bangladesh,Bolivia,Egypt,Indonesia and Usa.the colum shows the information of countries while the row gives data about quality of life
Overall,Usa experienced highy standard of life whereas the least class of life has lived by Bangladesh in 4 type out of 5.I
n the usa,people are consumed higher number of calories with the highest 74 level of expectancy but the least numb1of infant mortality has existed with 13160 GNP. Bolivian and indonesian are provide almost same amount of calories. It is 2086 and 2296 respectively. Surprisingly, there are just one year of difference in life expectancy between the Bolivian's and Indonesian's is 50 and 49 subsequently. But the large number of difference in infant mortality.
Bangladesh has the least number of GNP, consumption of calories and life expectancy. There are 140,1877 and 40 respectively.However, this country has higher number of infant morality which is 132.Egypt has average number of all condition life amoung five countries.
- Some people believe that there should be a gap year after finishing high school secondary school and before starting university To what extent you agree or disagree 95
- Some people believe that there should be a gap year after finishing high school secondary school and before starting university To what extent you agree or disagree 84
- Some people think that education is useless Others think that it is important Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines does this development brings more advantages or disadvantages 73
- Some people believe that there should be a gap year after finishing high school secondary school and before starting university To what extent you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Bolivia
... about the quality of life in Bangladesh,Bolivia,Egypt,Indonesia and Usa.the colum shows...
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Suggestion: , Indonesia
...lity of life in Bangladesh,Bolivia,Egypt,Indonesia and Usa.the colum shows the information...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Usa
...es data about quality of life Overall,Usa experienced highy standard of life wher...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... lived by Bangladesh in 4 type out of 5.I n the usa,people are consumed higher...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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...d by Bangladesh in 4 type out of 5.I n the usa,people are consumed higher numb...
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Suggestion: , people
...ladesh in 4 type out of 5.I n the usa,people are consumed higher number of calories ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
... 13160 GNP. Bolivian and indonesian are provide almost same amount of calories. It is 2...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'years'?
Suggestion: years
...ively. Surprisingly, there are just one year of difference in life expectancy betwee...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... There are 140,1877 and 40 respectively.However, this country has higher number of infa...
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Suggestion: Egypt
... number of infant morality which is 132.Egypt has average number of all condition lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43292682927 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84753198551 2.65546596893 145% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 146.052269089 43.030603864 339% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142826262554 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438677821891 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534107643433 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942304864529 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771652062174 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.