Forested Land Ielts task 1

The table illustrates information about the number of forested land in million of hectares in 6 separate continents in 1990, 2000 and 2005. Overall, squares of forest intend to decrease in most continents during this period of time.
In 1990, we can see where has the largest forested land is Europe with 989 million of hectares. In contract, it's only 199 million of hectares forest grew in Oceania. This number is just about 20 percents compared with one in Europe. In the second highest number of forest, it is in South America, with 946 million hectares. Indeed, Africa, Asia, North American have 749, 576 and 708 millions of hectares, in respectively.
In 2000, this numbers mostly begin to slightly decrease. The continent which has forested land falling the most deeply is South American. However, there is the only area, Europe where square of forest still increase with extra 8 million of hectares, the number reach to 998, approximately one billion of hectares.
In 2005, the forest in most continents doesn't intend to be restored. As we can see in the table, square of forest still continues dramatically disappearing.There are many continents where the number of forest decreases more than 50 million of hectares during time from 1990 to 2005 like South American, Africa. But, fortunately, the area of Europe still increase to reach 1001 million of hectares. Indeed North American still remain the area of forest with 705 million hectares.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...on about the number of forested land in million of hectares in 6 separate continents in...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...decrease in most continents during this period of time. In 1990, we can see where has the lar...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '708 million'.
Suggestion: 708 million
... Asia, North American have 749, 576 and 708 millions of hectares, in respectively. In 2000, th...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... In 2005, the forest in most continents doesnt intend to be restored. As we can see in...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ill continues dramatically disappearing.There are many continents where the number of...
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Line 4, column 399, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ease to reach 1001 million of hectares. Indeed North American still remain the area of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, so, still, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05833333333 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68617861572 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7086297513 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177237244916 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812403951992 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639790449531 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137946604361 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196997487426 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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