The given bar chart indicate a survey on few different age group on the fector contribute to make this environment plenty for working. The data is show in percentum.
It can be seen that, the individual age is 18 to 30 is team sperit in 70%. And age of 45to60 is same of 18to30 for working.chance for personal development is very high percentage of 95% in other fector affecting work performance in 18 to 30 year.As well as 45to60 year is 45%. A part from this, The environment of Relexed working is 80%in year 18to30.The age of people 18to30 is competent boss of 57%is near by 60%. And year of 45to60 is 60%in workers. More over, job security in year 18to30 in 40%.and year 45to60 is very lowest percentum of 20% in job security respectively.
As for as trend is concerned that, The 18to30 year of worker in Respect from calleagues is 40% and 45to60 year is 45% of workers in Respect from calleagues.In addition to this, The very high percentage of promotion prospects is near by chance for personal development in percentum of 80 in year of 18to30.As performance of affecting working of year 18to30 in job satisfication is 58%. More over, work environment is year 18to30 and 45to60 is same percentum is 25%. The money of worker is year 18to30 in 67% and 45to60 year of 65% respectively.
Overall,it is evident that, job security is very low percentage of year 45to60.and chance for personal development is very high percentage of 18to30.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: As
...cting work performance in 18 to 30 year.As well as 45to60 year is 45%. A part from...
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Suggestion: The
...of Relexed working is 80%in year 18to30.The age of people 18to30 is competent boss ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
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...nt in percentum of 80 in year of 18to30.As performance of affecting working of yea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, as for, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70982142857 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88562463948 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410714285714 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.9611916104 43.030603864 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08457925349 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457803461593 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036583487221 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626401923361 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328667810492 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.