The given chart below shows the participation of Australian chilly in sports outside school hour in 2014.

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The given chart below shows the participation of Australian chilly in sports outside school hour in 2014.

The given vertical chart revels the information about the 5 sports had been played by Australian children outside school during the year 2014. Sports were being played by both male and female. The given data is calibrated in per centimetres.

It can be seen that, in swimming, girls had slightly more participation in comparison to boys by 3%. Apart from all this, 20% of boys and 4% of girls played football during the year 2014. Moreover, number of boys had taken part in Netball, Basketball and No sports were 2%, 8% and 4% respectively.

Moving further, peak number of girls participated in Netball in comparison to other
4 sports: Swimming, football, Basketball and No Sports, Which were 18%. In addition to this, Basketball was being played by 8% boys and 7% of girls. On the other hand, 5% of girls and 4% of boys participated in no sports.

Overall, it is evident that maximum number of boys had participated in football, whereas maximum number of girls participated in Netball.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ipated in Netball in comparison to other 4 sports: Swimming, football, Basketball...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, whereas, apart from, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90532544379 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80392218554 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532544378698 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4230696125 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179381051782 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075284473967 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869076982708 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101654398175 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963926081271 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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