The given graph demonstrates about the most popular movies by genre for males and females while the pie chart shows box-office takings for several kinds of movie in the USA in 2010.

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The given graph demonstrates about the most popular movies by genre for males and females while the pie chart shows box-office takings for several kinds of movie in the USA in 2010.

Generally, the most popular types of movies were action and romantic comedy for both of genders. The type of action movies was gotten the largest percentage of box-office takings in the USA in 2010.

Looking at the details, there are action, comedy, thriller, science fiction, western and romantic comedy movies. Women showed higher outcome than men only type of romantic comedy and they were lower the rest of kinds.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 33.7804878049 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 351.0 965.302439024 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 69.0 196.424390244 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.8821214171 3.73543355544 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22915323241 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 48.0 106.607317073 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 111.6 283.868780488 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 5.80409338312 43.030603864 13% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.75 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18555767635 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116995472432 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105811351152 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156520980852 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13904466648 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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