Government should provide funding in public transportation where another denied from given notion To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Government should provide funding in public transportation. where another denied from given notion. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The importance of provide free transportation to public which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claimimg that it is beneficial while others reject this notion.the substantial influences of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years, in my opinion the both former and latter propositional appears to be more rational.This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive and negative impacts of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the fist and foremost reason behind this is that, most of the masses have no job opportunities by with it is very difficult for them to pay rent of transportation like buses,trains and air tickets those are very expensive noiwadays.So, authorities should need to focus upon it.Another striking benefit in this regard is that, if governemnt authorities provide free of cost transport services than it may help to in stop individual use of cars and bikes.Thus, may contribute in to control or stopage of pollution. categorically discussing, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is that, how to be in some states of india the whole expenses of transport paid by fundeing of government in public tranpostation , hence it make easy to travel anywhere for poor or for people those are under poverty ratio.

Probing ahead,one of teh main underlying reason stems from the fact is that, for economic purpose government need so many financial resources.For example, for maintainance of buses trains and roads, So if governemnt provide funding to public transportation than if effects to GDP rate of economy.Moving further it is pertinent to mention that, authorities should needc to make balance between economic Gross Development Product rate and individuals prospectives by with it may work in a balanced cycle.Moreover their are more other important factors of society those required high funding by government rather than transport services. To epitome, For hospitals and educations and basic factors. Apart from the reason mentioned above it can be clearly stated why bmany are against of this trend.

To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits and drawbacks of given notion are indeed too great to ignore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 965.302439024 208% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 377.0 196.424390244 192% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33421750663 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10809183839 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 106.607317073 208% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588859416446 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 283.868780488 223% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.4926829268 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.514796579 43.030603864 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 287.285714286 112.824112599 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8571428571 22.9334400587 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 5.23603664747 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155495600483 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633106118883 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395266020546 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879559206696 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307842201787 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 13.2329268293 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 61.2550243902 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.3012195122 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.06136585366 137% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 40.7170731707 282% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.9970731707 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

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but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 965.302439024 208% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 377.0 196.424390244 192% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33421750663 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10809183839 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 106.607317073 208% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588859416446 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 283.868780488 223% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.4926829268 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.514796579 43.030603864 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 287.285714286 112.824112599 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8571428571 22.9334400587 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 5.23603664747 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155495600483 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633106118883 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395266020546 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879559206696 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307842201787 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 13.2329268293 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 61.2550243902 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.3012195122 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.06136585366 137% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 40.7170731707 282% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.9970731707 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.