The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The given line graph represent global utilization of water since 1900 to 2000, over a period of 100 years. While the table depicts information about the consumption of water in Brazil and Congo in the year 2000.
Global water usage remained below 1,000km2 for all three sectors i-e: Agriculture, Industrial, and Domestic, since 1900 to 1950. Agriculture was the leading sector among the three and remained highest even in the year 2000. The graph remained almost constant for first 50 years with agriculture on the top followed by industrial and domestic use. The same position was maintained in the second half of the century. The usage of water jumped from 1,000 for farming, 20 for industries and 10km2 for the domestic purpose to 3,000, 800 and 300km2 respectively.
The table represents water utilization for Brazil and Congo in the year 2000. Brazil with a population of 176 million and irrigated land of 26,500 km2, had per head water consumption of 359 m3. In contrast to this, Congo had 5.2 million people and 100 km2 irrigation area had per person water utilization of only 8 m3.
To sum up, the utilization of water has been increased over the period of time. However, per head consumption is mostly dependent on total population and irrigated area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...in Brazil and Congo in the year 2000. Global water usage remained below ...
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... the leading sector among the three and remained highest even in the year 2000. The graph remain...
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...ined in the second half of the century. The usage of water jumped from 1,000 for fa...
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...o 3,000, 800 and 300km2 respectively. The table represents water utilizat...
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... and 300km2 respectively. The table represents water utilization for ...
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...on and irrigated land of 26,500 km2, had per head water consumption of 359 m3. In...
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...erson water utilization of only 8 m3. To sum up, the utilization of wate...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'in contrast', 'in contrast to', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279661016949 0.268076937826 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.0762711864407 0.116061578633 66% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0805084745763 0.0759168565197 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0254237288136 0.0366838410393 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.169491525424 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.021186440678 0.0379272487307 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64319665774 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021186440678 0.0210936926555 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00423728813559 0.00175180941692 242% => OK
Determiners: 0.0932203389831 0.0948980150116 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1311.0 1161.00487805 113% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.9 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15492957746 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300469483568 0.337110787985 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.215962441315 0.247514529752 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183098591549 0.171178102325 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1220657277 0.112407865282 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64319665774 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544600938967 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 49.9312853758 49.3433353143 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.75 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9880017787 42.9750493124 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 135.714022679 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.48048780488 608% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.3462441315 47.7609492067 82% => OK
Elegance: 4.625 2.94281807926 157% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366756755582 0.418131533498 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147874184497 0.181151798455 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0930014828956 0.0850326197045 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.611587070995 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.103287628193 0.157042692854 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171849977192 0.228904883108 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894812254372 0.108899403657 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342428549557 0.367819155151 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0607848829358 0.0812612215331 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251758452251 0.316326947829 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627397145012 0.0921553760075 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.08536585366 220% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 3.02926829268 264% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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