Given are the graph and table comparing the amount of water used in the world and two specific countries, which are Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo, where water is consumed.
Overall, it is evident that an increase in global water use did not stop between the period given in the graph. For the table, Brazil used more water than Congo in 2000.
According to the graph, as we have seen, the highest use of water was observed in agriculture which consumed about 500(Km3) in 1900. Between 1900 and 2000, the rise of global water use in agriculture, industrial and domestic use was gradual. However, During the last 50 year to 2000, the amount of water used for agriculture boosted from around 1000(km3) to 3000(km3). like agriculture, it in industrial and domestic use went up but slightly. Generally, in 1950, the rate of industrial and domestic use was approximately the same but industrial use increased more than domestic use for which water is used to around 400(km3) to almost 1200 in 2000.
If the table was looked so clearly, it is evident that the difference in water consumption between Brazil and congo was significant in 2000. Beside the water consumption, the table also compares its population and irrigated land. Brazil had 176 million and 26,500 km2 irrigated land and their water consumption per person is 359 m3. In contrast to Brazil, the Democratic Republic of Congo had 5.2 million population and 100 km2 irrigated land only need 8 m3 water consumption per person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87007874016 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61206453706 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492125984252 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2650645893 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.083333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35991329645 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150889589169 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662476085936 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238417986926 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528309192083 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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