The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
the graph and table illustrate the amount of water people consumed in Brazil and Congo in 2000 and the global water usage in terms of sectors
Overall, agriculture was the sector that expended the highest amount of water while the lowest number of water consumption belonged to domestic use .All of the international water expenditure increased after 100 years. The water consumption per person in Brazil was larger than that in congo in 2000
Looking to the graph, both industrial use and domestic use started with 0 km^3 in 1900 while there was around 500 km^3 already be utilized by agricultural sector. in the year 2000 , 3000 km^3 was the largest quantity of water used for agricultural purposes. From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to over 1000 km^3, whereas national use rose slowly to only 300 km^3 which was the lowest quantity of water usage.
Moving to the table chart , it shows the differences in agricultural consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil around 26500 km^2 with that in the D.R.C around 100 km^2. The water consumption per person in Brazil was 359 m^3 which was nearly 45 times higher than that in Congo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85784313725 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5382222803 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.4433643787 43.030603864 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.166666667 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262351130515 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14295656142 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700142556907 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185609066221 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498879973492 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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