The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differentcountries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Information given as to clarify the use and consumption of water on a global basis. The line chart illustrates amount of water use all over the world by categories, on a 10-year interval from 1900 to 2000; whereas the table indicates its spending in two nations Brazil and Congo for the year 2000.
Over 100 years, the utilization of water soars up without declining. Agriculture reported to consume the largest amount of water with a rapid accumulation in the previous century. From 500km3 in 1900, the amount dramatically rose up to 3000 km3 in 2000, only for farming and cultivation. This is approximately 3 times larger than the amount industrial use and 6 times larger than domestic consumed, also in 2000.
Moving to the table, we can see that the water use in Brazil overwhelms those amount of Congo in 2000. All data reported to reflect water consumption in Brazil absolutely excess the index from Democratic Republic of Congo. A brazilian reported to use up to nearly 400m3 of water, which is 50 times higher than the total water a Congo resident spend in 2000.
To sum up, the statistics do conclude an overview of the water spending worldwide in 20th century, and specifically refer to the consuming amount in two tropical countries for audience to have a better wrap up.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'reported consuming'.
Suggestion: reported consuming
...soars up without declining. Agriculture reported to consume the largest amount of water with a rapi...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'reported reflecting'.
Suggestion: reported reflecting
...those amount of Congo in 2000. All data reported to reflect water consumption in Brazil absolutely ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82805429864 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73772483683 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570135746606 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9760807377 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187254958289 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893727956419 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619373418227 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120600551237 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485329486497 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.