The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Given are the line graph contrasting the temperature through a year and the table delineating the amount of sunshine hours in three discrete large cities: London, New York and Sydney in the world.
Perceptibly, in the first line graph, the figure of temperature in all the cities is fluctuated over the year. Furthermore, total average hours of sunshine in Sydney ranks first among the other cities.
When it comes to the line graph, in Sydney, the temperature is plateau in Jan to Mar with approximately 25 C degrees before plunging from Apr to reach around 15 degrees in June. Followed by, the temperature leaps quickly from Jun to 25 degrees in Dec. Meanwhile, London and New York is lower temperatures in Jan to Mar than Sydney and this figure surges exponentially from Apr to reach peak in July before slumping from Aug to Dec.
Regarding the table, the total number of hours sunshine in Sydney is highest with 2473 hours in year, the second highest position belonged to New York with 25535 hours, followed by 1180 hours of sunshine in London per year.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-02-11 | Giang Tran | 73 | view |
| 2022-08-25 | Nguyen Thi Thanh Xuan | 67 | view |
| 2022-08-25 | Nguyen Thi Thanh Xuan | 73 | view |
| 2022-03-27 | quynh123445 | view | |
| 2022-02-16 | monmon12345 | 73 | view |
- It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages 78
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarize the information by selectin and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 100
- The maps show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages
- The use of corporal punishment physically hitting students in schools is in decline yet it should be used to improve behaviour To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the line graph contrasting the temperat...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, regarding, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79781420765 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60190784864 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6435704727 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273026745263 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125183713285 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776712784327 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180738097968 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763176290333 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.