Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years in the world that many cities now are "one big traffic jam". Do you think that this statement is true? What measure can government take to address this problem?

It is Generally Accepted that individuals by so many cars over the past 30 years and regarding this there is no majority of traffic jams in every city of the world this Aise will highlight some potential solutions which government can take to distract masses from by your using their private cars is on the later paragraph.

Firstly every individual wants to buy your private car because the want to show off to their belongings and want to leave luxurious life probably due to bad system of transportation therefore there is a big traffic jam in each angle of the world in addition There are several types of cars which anyone easily by like Nano is known as poor man's car.

Movie father There are several steps of government take action on them The Isliye control the big this big problem first is that government should have to improve Transportation system and spend more budget on it because each person wants to live a comfortable life and with the lack of problem of transport system they force them to buy their own car because it is convenient for them if these type of actions government take automatically the types of hardships easily disappear for instance in a recent survey report fight that almost half of the population by their own cars because of poor transport system.

In conclusion I strongly open that government should maintain all the public facilities and discourage each person from using their caste they also give divorce to the people who use public facilities more.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81467181467 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55299081638 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559845559846 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.395586188 49.4020404114 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 311.75 106.682146367 292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.75 20.7667163134 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210157488707 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1312928275 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110581626712 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1312928275 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110581626712 0.056905535591 194% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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