The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
Using the metro on a day to day basis is necessary for some people because it is their primary source of transportation to travel from one place to another to disregard the traffic jams caused by pedestrians and other private and public vehicle. So, the metro is one of the commonly used mode of transportation in the whole world. Focusing on the major subway system in Europe, the London Underground has the longest path period with a distance of 408 km long. While the Moscow Metro and Paris Metro only have a distance of 300 km and 214 km long respectively. Second focal point of this topic is the sum of stations per operation, the Paris Metro has hundreds of stations in operations ranging up to 300 stations while the London Underground only has 275 stations and the Moscow Metro has 182 stations. Lastly is the total passengers, a lot of people use the Moscow Metro that is going up to 6.5 million people considerably that has the second largest path period and the least figure of stations. Followed by the Paris Metro that is ranging up to 4.5 million people given that it has the least path period and has the most figure of stations. Lastly, 3 million people use the London Underground even though it has the greatest distance in the path period and just a little bit behind by the figure of stations compared to the Paris Metro.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1268, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... distance in the path period and just a little bit behind by the figure of stations compar...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72284644195 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60823174075 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475655430712 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7933106626 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0682116049742 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456234724238 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831854383467 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145761789291 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135794689972 0.0819641961636 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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