The graph and table illustrates the average monthly temperatures of London, New York and Sydney and annual hours of sunshine in these cities. Overall, it can be seen that the totally of Sydney and New York are higher than totally of London and Sydney received more sunshine in the last years while New York and London received more in the mid year.
Firstly, London and New York remain stable temperatures from January to March, with around 15 degrees. There were dramatical rise temperatures in New York and London from March to July at 30 degrees and 25 degrees. July to December in New York and London witness significant decrease from 30 degrees to 5 degrees and from 25 degrees to 10 degrees
In contrast, Sydney is about 25 degrees in January which decrease moderately from January to July, with at 15 degrees. There was mark rise in temperatures Sydney from July to December, at just below 30 degrees.
People in New York and Sydney have more sunny mornings with at 2535 and 2473 totally annual hours respectively while sunshine in London just at 1158 totally annual hour
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 81
- Some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news Discuss both views and give your opinion
- Some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
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... London received more in the mid year. Firstly, London and New York remain stab...
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...main stable temperatures from January to March, with around 15 degrees. There wer...
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...rise temperatures in New York and London from March to July at 30 degrees and 2...
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... New York and London from March to July at 30 degrees and 25 degrees. July to D...
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...egrees and from 25 degrees to 10 degrees In contrast, Sydney is about 25 degrees...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78609625668 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45459788137 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449197860963 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7746925274 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122033186738 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843612639511 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102773816187 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800784102732 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655070129051 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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